Kia Ora Daniel,
your Bridge poem is very heartwarming. I like your illustration, but next time it would look even better if your background was a pleasing colour like light blue, and your illustration would be in the center of the drawing so it looks balanced. That’s all my feedback for you, Daniel. Keep up the good work!
Jamie
Kia Ora Daniel,
your Bridge poem is very heartwarming. I like your illustration, but next time it would look even better if your background was a pleasing colour like light blue, and your illustration would be in the center of the drawing so it looks balanced. That’s all my feedback for you, Daniel. Keep up the good work!
Jamie